College admissions officers want to read essays that are "fresh, upbeat and lively" according to the Dean of Admissions of Lafayette College. "We would like each essay to offer us a picture of the candidate that just isn't visible in the list of courses and grades or numbers resulting from a three-hour multiple choice examination. We want to "see" the writer… There has never been anyone who is just like you… We leave it up to you to tell us your story."

Your essay offers an opportunity to share more of yourself with the admissions committee. It should reflect both your self-awareness and ability to write. The essay can show priorities, values, and the ability to get something out of an experience.

A workshop in early September is given to senior students on Writing a Memorable Essay, by the Guidance Department.


SUGGESTIONS FOR WRITING YOUR ESSAY:

• Write your own essay-others may help you edit, but your essay must be your own voice.


• Be honest. Show your strengths as well as your weaknesses.


• Do not repeat what is included in other parts of the application by making the essay a second resume.


• Do use wit and imagination, but don't try to be funny if that is not your personality.


• Avoid generalities. Use details and examples to illustrate your ideas.


• Write about something you really care about.


• Stick to the length that is requested.


• Have your essay proofread by your English teacher.